tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post4422518261223013595..comments2023-03-20T02:29:37.857-07:00Comments on Different Corners In My Life: Description Exerciseskhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02039448074178382326noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post-19298191239888612732012-03-08T21:35:58.013-08:002012-03-08T21:35:58.013-08:00You are so right on! Balancing dialogue with descr...You are so right on! Balancing dialogue with description is a delicate process. I tend to be heavier on the description and I'm constantly going back over my stuff and editing out unnecessary words, phrases, etc. Love the addition you made to your post and thanks so much for the plug. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13160671849686091948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post-58699393321515376982012-03-08T11:20:55.247-08:002012-03-08T11:20:55.247-08:00Yep you are right! And your comment triggered me t...Yep you are right! And your comment triggered me to write more to this post, so if you get a chance go back and read the 2 new paragraphs I added at the top.<br />Oh and it is still windy here! Love your pun! lol!khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02039448074178382326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post-4754031288567823242012-03-08T11:20:10.642-08:002012-03-08T11:20:10.642-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02039448074178382326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post-68732027540882253652012-03-08T01:13:14.231-08:002012-03-08T01:13:14.231-08:00Excellent writing exercise! Descriptions can defin...Excellent writing exercise! Descriptions can definitely trip us up...either getting too long and windy (hah!) or sparse and boring. Thanks, Karen! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13160671849686091948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post-14108580643705028072012-03-03T11:41:56.471-08:002012-03-03T11:41:56.471-08:00Hi Jo! How are things with you? I grew up here and...Hi Jo! How are things with you? I grew up here and you would think I'd be used to these winds by now, but... And it's windy again today. No wonder I've had a headache the last few days. Do you have loads out to CA very often? Overturned trucks? Yes, especially on the 15 just west of the Cajon Pass, terrible place for trucks during these winds.<br />Thank You I hope you enjoy it. If you get a chance please leave a review on Amazon. Good or bad, I'm always open to suggestions. :-)<br />Well I hope you have a great day. Stay safe and I am headed over to your blog now.khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02039448074178382326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post-71576694879722200852012-03-03T08:39:30.023-08:002012-03-03T08:39:30.023-08:00Hey, Karen. Oh...I know a lot about CA winds! Seen...Hey, Karen. Oh...I know a lot about CA winds! Seen lots of big trucks blown over by them. Been lucky, though, not ours. Just bought Kyle and Kelly on Amazon. Looking forward to reading it! If you get a chance, stop by my blog. Thanks!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13235971118264768927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post-56666916973943366562012-03-02T14:42:25.077-08:002012-03-02T14:42:25.077-08:00Hi Jo! Yep, the dictionary comes in handy. Not to ...Hi Jo! Yep, the dictionary comes in handy. Not to worry about the winds I'm in CA. We have strong winds, but not tornado ones. :-)khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02039448074178382326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2017306041804208602.post-8773416095330136532012-03-02T14:29:05.007-08:002012-03-02T14:29:05.007-08:00Sometimes the simplest things are the hardest to e...Sometimes the simplest things are the hardest to explain, but going back to the basics, like the dictionary, always helps. Hope the tornado generating storms pass you by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13235971118264768927noreply@blogger.com