Showing posts with label describe. Show all posts
Showing posts with label describe. Show all posts

Friday, March 2, 2012

Description Exercises

Have you ever had a conversation and then walk away thinking, "I should have said that!" You know... hindsight! Don't we all wish we had that! Well that's what I love about blogs. I can say "hey I should of said that or added that" and here I am editing! A comment from IntricateKnot and you can find her blog here  http://intricateknot.blogspot.com/ triggered an AHA moment for me. So with much ado I have to add to this blog post :-))
I was reading a blurb a couple of weeks ago for this one book and the description in the paragraph was mind blowing and not in a good way. They way overdid their description to the point that 12 words out of 20, I didn't know if they were actual words that I could find in the dictionary or if they were made up words, but this got me to thinking about my own writing and I realized I don't describe enough. I tend to rely heavily on dialogue between my characters and make my readers use their imagination, maybe sometimes too much!
So I'm thinking there has got to be a fine line there somewhere. Where do you find it? Or do you? Do you rely too much on the dialogue or too much on the description? I'd love to hear how you balance out the two.


Good Morning and Happy Friday! It is VERY WINDY in my area this morning and it has triggered my blog post for today.
How do you describe the wind? What if it's a blustery wind? Exactly what is a blustery wind? Well according to my dictionary Blustery is
3. vi blow loudly in gusts: to blow in sudden loud gusts (refers to winds)

What is wind? According to the dictionary
1. moving air: air moving across the surface of the planet or through the atmosphere at a speed fast enough to be noticed 
So how do you describe it? What if you needed to describe wind to someone who has never felt it?

What about water? Or try explaining a lush green lawn to someone who can't see it.
Sometimes it's easier to describe solid objects. A person, a house, things we can touch or hold.

But explaining thoughts, feelings, actions, and emotions can be difficult at times.
Take the time to look around you today and work on describing things you see and can't see. .Picture yourself describing these thing to someone who can't see or feel  them. Have fun with it!
Wishing you all a wonderful weekend!